Story conclusion The secret of doom!

Finally I am at home and all day long my head has been banging   in my head.  Once   I get home my hand shakes with fear. Then I put it in my pocket but all faces are on me. My mum called   me but I say I have something to tell you. I take a deep breath and tell them I have opened a new key ingredient to a new world. I told them i one 200,00 for  descovering  this.My mum smiled  happily.



One Response to “Story conclusion The secret of doom!”

  1. Amber I really like this it is very descriptive I love this secret !!!!!!!!!!!!

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