a conclusion

Finally home and bursting with wonder. I can’t wait to tell my beloved family my magnificent secret. As I tremble with fear, I have no idea what they would think of me. They might think I’m completely out of my head. I take a deep breathe and tell my family. ” mother , father I […]

an conclusion

Finally, I come home in my man city kit and my mum’s face light up like a firework on Christmas day. I tell my family. That I got scouted by man city my mum is so happy for me. I said I have to go to England for the premier league, “Ok, “said my mum […]


Finally, I arrive home after, the long day. I have come to revel my, secrete.  I’ve been bursting for this moment. My parents stared at my face and wondered why my face was so red like a red tomato. I swiftly put my hand in my pocet and gentely take my key out. I started […]

The secret

Finally I have arrived back at home, I have been waiting for long that my heart is pumping with fear, I really need to tell my secret! As I walked into the door they looked very normal, but when I decided to tell them they all smiled, they said “ How? Why? Where?” I took […]

Story conclusion The secret of doom!

Finally I am at home and all day long my head has been banging   in my head.  Once   I get home my hand shakes with fear. Then I put it in my pocket but all faces are on me. My mum called   me but I say I have something to tell you. I take a […]

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